May 8, 2012
I’ve written before and been published—environmental and legal pieces—but never fiction, unless you count the story I wrote when I was a child, “The Haunted House.” It was story about a haunted house (hmm) with countless halls and doors, written out in third-grader longhand. In that story I wrote of all these hallways and doors, but never got around to telling why they were scary or what was behind the doors. I’m hoping to do a more thorough job this time around.
In recent years, I’ve worked for a conservation group, Grand Canyon Trust, which aims, “ to protect and restore the Colorado Plateau—its spectacular landscapes, flowing rivers, clean air, diversity of plants and animals, and areas of beauty and solitude.” This has been great employment, showing me how to care for the beautiful region I’m lucky to live in. Other experiences that might leak into my story writing include: blackjack card counting, law school, composing music, endurance running, and stumbling through haunted houses.
In this blog I intend to share my thoughts on learning to write fiction, describing the unfolding process. I have little idea what I’m doing, but expect to learn a lot about writing and myself.
Along the way, I’ll share what books I’m reading, helpful texts on writing, and my own writings. Comments and participation are welcome.
Thanks for reading!
Nikolai
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If you had to bet, would you bet on a pixie girl or 10-million millionaires?
A beautiful pixie girl from Deadpine, Arizona, suffers back spasms worse than anyone I know. The spasms rip and chew her nerves, ligaments, and muscles, leaving her pixie spirit disintegrating, rising like a mushroom cloud, dropping butterfly wings on all that suffer, slouching away. The spasms are caused by millionaire-dinosaurs that devour everything. As long as millionaire-dinosaurs exist, the pixie girl has spasms and is in pain.
But the beautiful pixie girl has a recurring fairytale dream. In the dream she is running for her life, running from a large monster with a mouth as big as its face. In her hand, she protects a beetle. She runs fast, but the monster runs faster, and the pixie girl, beetle, and monster reach the edge of a cliff at the same time. The monster’s slavering maw opens wide, but the pixie girl escapes, leaping into the abyss. She flies and falls, falling and fearful, but feeling fear for only a second. Elation washes over her as she falls a great distance, finally plunging into a cushiony pillow of beautiful wildflowers—purple asters, desert stars, yellow evening primrose, mariposa lilies, parry penstemon, lupine, larkspur—flowers beyond count. One hand reaches for white, yellow, blue, and purple blossoms; the other holds the little beetle. The faceless monster looks down from the cliff edge and is hungry.
Everyday, 16,000 children die from starvation while 10-million millionaires in the world dine on braised veal with blanquilla pears and terrine of foie gras served with rhubarb compote and raspberry and ginger chutney. The pixie girl suffers.
Economic injustice runs amok and is ruining the planet. Things must change; forces are in play. The center, the ends, and all that lies in between cannot and will not hold. Thanks to capitalism, behemoth creatures gorge while misery spreads like ants across desert sands.
Pascal’s well-known wager posits there is more to be gained from wagering on the existence of god than from atheism. A pixie girl’s wager posits there is more to be gained from betting on the compassionate hearts of people than a caste system of dinosaur capitalism.
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Early this morning, the pixie girl rescued a land-only beetle drowning in the stream behind the house where she lives. Millionaire-dinosaurs do not have time to save beetles; they eat beetles and everything else, leaving peasants crumbs. Dinosaurs support good causes when their accountants show reduced taxes and a larger market share.
The beautiful pixie girl suffers no ordinary back spasms amenable to conventional treatments such as chiropractic or massage. Her back spasms are ideologically wedded to a sick system, a chronic rift in the economic-political fabric. As inexplicable as particles in a field dynamic, millionaire-dinosaurs and pixie paroxysms are linked. It is not her fault; it just is. The pixie girl is a canary-in-the-coal-mine of a world of economic injustice, a mysterious victim of global inequities between rich and poor. As long as millionaire-dinosaurs exist, the pixie girl has spasms. Sadly, the pixie girl cannot defend herself; she has no weapons, unless you count her pure spirit and reverence for life. The pixie girl loves streams and grass and beetles and icicle stars.
In the end, there is more to be gained betting on the pure, reverent heart of a pixie girl. I am betting that wildflowers will carpet the earth, land-only beetles will find a helping hand, and the pixie girl’s back spasms will disappear, going the way of the dinosaur. Capitalist consumerism exists, but it should not and someday will not. Who am I to tell this barbed fairytale? Someone right outside your door.
~ Nikolai Lash
Learn MoreThe Department of Interior is re-examining Glen Canyon Dam operations in what is called the Long-Term Experimental and Management Plan Environmental Impact Statement, LTEMP EIS. Following are comments I wrote for Grand Canyon Trust:
Several federal laws have been passed to protect Grand Canyon, but prominent among them is the Grand Canyon Protection Act (GCPA), signed into law on October 30, 1992. The GCPA states:
The Secretary shall operate Glen Canyon Dam in accordance with the additional criteria and operating plans specified in section 1804 and exercise other authorities under existing law in such a manner as to protect, mitigate adverse impacts to, and improve the values for which Grand Canyon National Park and Glen Canyon National Recreation Area were established, including, but not limited to natural and cultural resources and visitor use.
The intent of the GCPA is unambiguous: to operate the dam in a manner that protects park resources, notwithstanding impacts to hydropower generation. Senator John McCain, co-sponsor of the bill stated:
The erratic release of water from the dam to meet peak electric power demands has destroyed Colorado River beaches, and harmed other natural, cultural, and recreational resources. Somewhere along the line, we forgot our obligation to the canyon and to the future generations for whom we hold it in trust.
The destructive “erratic releases” Senator McCain refers to are the ceaselessly fluctuating flows from Glen Canyon Dam that generate cheap peaking power but, in the bargain, unravel the health of Grand Canyon. Fluctuating flows erode sediment faster than steady flows, diminishing beaches, harming native fish habitat, eroding centuries-old cultural sites, and jeopardizing the existence of the 4-million-year-old humpback chub, an endangered fish found only in the Colorado River.
Before Glen Canyon Dam’s existence, Grand Canyon was characterized by huge sweeping beaches built up with raging snowmelt floods in the spring. The wind picked up the beach sediment and carried it inland, burying a multitude of archaeological sites. Water temperature varied from freezing in the winter to a balmy 85 degrees in the summer. Eight native fish, supremely adapted to these harsh conditions, thrived in the mainstem and tributaries. River runners during the twentieth century began taking advantage of these huge beaches for camping.
Glen Canyon Dam blocked the Colorado River in 1963 and initiated a cascade of ecosystem changes. The dam traps about 85 percent of the annual sediment supply for Grand Canyon — the other 15 percent coming from tributaries within the canyon. In addition, water releases from the dam were altered to generate the maximum amount of peaking hydropower. The loss of sediment supply and the greatly increased rate of erosion from flows designed to maximize hydropower set in motion the continual loss of sediment from Grand Canyon. Research on annual sediment balance has shown only one year when Grand Canyon has not lost sediment, and this one positive year resulted from a unique sequence of late season flood events.
The loss of sediment from Grand Canyon has resulted in fewer and smaller beaches. It has also eliminated significant critical habitat for native fish. Sediment deposits create complex shorelines and underwater features that are used by native fish for spawning and rearing. Four of the eight species of native fish that once plied the waters of Grand Canyon have already been lost. A fifth species, the endangered humpback chub, is vulnerable to being lost from Grand Canyon because virtually all spawning and rearing habitat has disappeared from the mainstem.
The continual loss of sediment from Grand Canyon has also resulted in archaeological sites being exposed to erosion and impacts from visitors. Historically, these sites were protected with a regularly renewed layer of sediment derived from the beaches and transported by the wind. Without the influx of new sediment, we constantly lose these irreplaceable features of our cultural heritage.
The way in which water is released from Glen Canyon Dam has profound effects on the river corridor, the species living there, and the abundant cultural sites. Simply stated, water can be released as either steady flows or fluctuating flows. Neither flow regime impacts water supplies or water deliveries by the Colorado River; however, over the last 15 years, science has shown that fluctuating flows damage all the key resources in Grand Canyon–the beaches, the backwater habitats for native fish spawning and rearing, the native shoreline plants and animals, and cultural and archaeological sites. At the same time, scientists have concluded that steady flows are very likely to be optimal for all sediment-related resources. A recent report from Grand Canyon Monitoring and Research Center concluded that fluctuating flows following the last high-flow experiment quickly eviscerated the benefits created by the high flow.
Two types of flows are needed: 1) regular high flows under sediment-enriched conditions to deposit sediment from tributaries and to scour sediment from the bottom of the river to rebuild beaches and near shore habitat for native fish, and 2) seasonally-adjusted steady flows, based on the natural rhythms of the pre-dam river, which would preserve beaches, protect native fish habitat, and stabilize centuries-old cultural sites.
Park resources continue to decline under current dam operations and a change is needed now. It is critical that the LTEMP alternatives consist of alternative dam operating criteria (in concert with other management actions) designed to meet the requirements of the Grand Canyon Protection Act.
In addition to the GCPA, alternatives must be consistent with the many laws and policies that govern water releases, park resources and values, and hydropower production. Because of the trade-offs inherent in managing these resources, Congress has established priorities by enacting the GCPA. The GCPA makes it clear that dam operations must be guided first by meeting the legal requirements for water delivery to the lower basin, and then by the need for protecting park resources and values. All other considerations, including hydropower production, are a lower priority.
The Colorado River Ecosystem (CRE) has been drastically altered by the presence and operation of Glen Canyon Dam and other changes, and achieving the resource objectives for the CRE will require bold action. Thankfully, there is a tremendous pool of scientific information from the CRE and other river systems that is available for developing and testing alternative dam operations and other management actions to meet the requirements of the GCPA.
Steady Flows Conserve Sediment and Warm Water
Most of the resources of concern in Grand Canyon are reliant upon sediment in one way or another. Sediment conservation should thus be a key component of all alternatives considered in the LTEMP EIS. The best flows for conserving sediment are steady flows. A USGS Fact Sheet (Publication #2009-3033) summed up the science position on steady flows in Grand Canyon this way:
For a given volume of water to be released from Glen Canyon Dam, the optimal dam operation for accumulating tributary-supplied sand is a constant, steady flow over the entire year.
Steady flows also warm river water, especially near the shoreline. This is important as native fish need warmer temperatures to successfully reproduce. Two specific types of steady flows should be considered as alternatives in the EIS:
Four-Year Experimental Blocks
Because of the uncertainties attending any new flow regime, one possible alternative would be a 12-year series of three four-year experimental blocks that test the pros and cons of both kinds of steady flows described above. The 12-year experiment might begin with four years of Seasonally-Adjusted Steady Flows, followed by four years of Modified Low Fluctuating Flows for comparison’s sake, and finish with four years of Year-Round Steady Flows. At the end of the 12 years, all three flow regimes would be analyzed to see which produces the best results for the resources in Grand Canyon, consistent with the Grand Canyon Protection Act.
High-Flow Events
High-Flow Events (HFEs) should be a part of all alternatives. High flows done on a regular basis when sufficient sediment is in the river system can help build beaches and improve other sediment-related resources.
The current limit of HFEs to 45,000 cfs should be changed. Sediment science suggests that flows of 60,000 cfs and more would be extremely beneficial for the sediment-based resources in Grand Canyon. Before Glen Canyon Dam was completed, the annual spring snowmelt floods ranged between 35,000 and 120,000 cfs. Beaches, native fish habitat, cultural sites, and other resources would benefit by regular HFEs that mirror these pre-dam floods.
2007 Shortage Criteria
Modified Low Fluctuating Flows plus equalization flows equals massive destruction of Grand Canyon. Because of the guidelines adopted in the “Colorado River Interim Guidelines for Lower Basin Shortages and the Coordinated Operations of Lake Powell and Lake Mead” (Interim Guidelines), huge equalization flows were released in 2011, transporting a record amount of sediment from Grand Canyon, dramatically eroding beaches and damaging Grand Canyon resources.
The Interim Guidelines as adopted has set back sediment conservation in Grand Canyon several years. Higher flow volumes have a direct effect on sand transport, a fact corroborated in the modeling simulations of sand transport for hypothetical annual release volumes as published in USGS Open File Report 2010-1133, “Evaluation of Water Year 2011 Glen Canyon Dam Flow Release Scenarios on Downstream Sand Storage along the Colorado River in Arizona” (Wright and Grams, 2010).
To remedy this situation, the Interim Guidelines should be amended to include consideration of the requirements of the GCPA. It should also explicitly be acknowledged that when equalization is required, larger flows can and should be released over a two- or three-year period. This longer term of releases would still satisfy the criteria for moving water from Powell to Mead, but would do it in a manner that better protects the resources in Grand Canyon.
Extirpated Species
A plan to reintroduce extirpated species in Grand Canyon should be a part of all alternatives considered in the LTEMP EIS. These might include: the river otter (Lutra canadensis), razorback sucker (Xyrauchen texanus), Colorado pikeminnow (Ptychocheilus lucius), and bonytail (Gila elegans)).
Reintroducing extirpated species is one of the 12 goals highlighted in the Stategic Plan of the Glen Canyon Dam Adaptive Management Program. It is also a park value supported by the Grand Canyon Protection Act.
Sediment Augmentation
The EIS should examine options for mechanically introducing additional sediment below the dam, to augment that which is periodically available from tributaries.
Temperature Control Device
The natural flow cycle of the Colorado River before Glen Canyon Dam was constructed included a seasonal warming trend in the late summer as the water temperature increased to approximately 85 degrees. After the dam was constructed, the temperature of released water became relatively steady at between 45-50 degrees as water was drawn from the deep penstock intakes. Even though the released water warms as it moves downstream, it still does not normally the temperature that allows endangered, warm water fish, such as the humpback chub to reproduce in the mainstem of the Colorado River.
The EIS should actively evaluate the efficacy of implementing a Temperature Control Device that would provide temperature control flexibility and improved water quality. A selective withdrawal structure or other methodology could improve the ability to create productive habitat for endangered fish and also offer more flexibility to respond to changing ecosystem concerns in future years.
As stated in the 1995 Glen Canyon Dam FEIS:
Increasing mainstem water temperatures by means of selective withdrawal structures installed at Glen Canyon Dam offers the greatest potential for creating new spawning populations of humpback chub and other native fish in Grand Canyon.
It is critical that the LTEMP alternatives consist of alternative dam operating criteria in concert with other management actions designed to meet the requirements of the Grand Canyon Protection Act while being consistent with other laws including those regarding water delivery, endangered species, cultural resources, and water quality. The alternative selected as best meeting these criteria should then be tested for the appropriate number of years to achieve the desired level of confidence in the results.
The LTEMP provides a public opportunity for Interior and the responsible agencies to accomplish something big — to meet in full the requirements of the Grand Canyon Protection Act. To do this, the LTEMP must be intellectually honest, legally defensible, scientifically credible, and reflect the high value the public places on the integrity of the natural, cultural, and recreational resources in this most iconic of national parks.
~Nikolai Lash
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